Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
First, we need to abolish society\'s prejudices against people with disabilities.
Second, we must give same chance for working to disabled people.
Third, we must make infrastructure for disabled people, which can minimize their inconvenience.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, [이름]! You have really nice ideas. :)
I think those will be a good help for the disabled.
Great job! :)
- T. Rina ^^
1. First, we need to abolish society\'s prejudices against people with disabilities.
>> CORRECT!
2. Second, we must give same chance for working to disabled people.
>> Second, we must give a chance for disabled people to work.
3. Third, we must make infrastructure for disabled people, which can minimize their inconvenience.
>> Third, we must make infrastructures for disable people, which can minimize their inconveniences.
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