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1.
The CoVid-19 have not still resolved perfectly in China.
The Chinese government thinks it\'s over from CoVid-19 in their area.
But the Chinese government is arrogant.
They bragged about their work to other countries through the news.
And Chinese people are mistaken that it is over from the CoVid-19 in Wuhan.
Therefore, they are experiencing a second wave of CoVid-19 infections.
2.
I think China has to lock down Wuhan area but except coercion.
Because all countries don\'t know when a vaccine is developed.
But I think they should Wuhan impose another lock until the CoVid-19 is calmed down again.
And they don\'t have to loosen the boundaries.
Therefore, they need to think it\'s a serious problem
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~Lucy
The CoVid-19 have not still resolved perfectly in China.
>>The CoVid-19 has not still resolved perfectly in China.
The Chinese government thinks it\'s over from CoVid-19 in their area.
>>CORRECT!
But the Chinese government is arrogant.
But the Chinese government is arrogant.
>>CORRECT!
They bragged about their work to other countries through the news.
They bragged about their work to other countries through the news.
>>CORRECT!
And Chinese people are mistaken that it is over from the CoVid-19 in Wuhan.
And Chinese people are mistaken that it is over from the CoVid-19 in Wuhan.
>>CORRECT!
Therefore, they are experiencing a second wave of CoVid-19 infections.
Therefore, they are experiencing a second wave of CoVid-19 infections.
>>CORRECT!
I think China has to lock down Wuhan area but except coercion.
I think China has to lock down Wuhan area but except coercion.
>>CORRECT!
Because all countries don\'t know when a vaccine is developed.
Because all countries don\'t know when a vaccine is developed.
>>CORRECT!
But I think they should Wuhan impose another lock until the CoVid-19 is calmed down again.
But I think they should Wuhan impose another lock until the CoVid-19 is calmed down again.
>>But I think they should impose another lockdwon in Wuhan until the CoVid-19 infection rate calm down again.
And they don\'t have to loosen the boundaries.
>>CORRECT!
Therefore, they need to think it\'s a serious problem
>>CORRECT!
Therefore, they need to think it\'s a serious problem
>>CORRECT!
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