Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
To make this world better place,
we must keep the law and respect for others.
The law save us from crimes.
And if we repect for others, we can
decrease many conflict.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, [이름]!
You have a really good idea. I totally agree with you!
- T. Rina ^^
1. To make this world better place, we must keep the law and respect for others.
>> To make this world a better place, we must follow the law and keep the respect for others.
>> To make this world a better place, we must follow the law and keep the respect for others.
2. The law save us from crimes.
>> The law saves us from crimes.
>> The law saves us from crimes.
3. And if we repect for others, we can decrease many conflict.
>> And if we have respect for others, we can decrease many conflicts.
OR: And if we respect others, conflicts can be decreased.
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