Homework!!
학생이 쓴 원문
Finally l found the homework box!!!
I love watch musical.
My first musical was and my favorite musical is .
In the past my dream was musical actor.
But, I like and confident to draw. So, someday I want to design musical poster!
강사 첨삭
Finally! Send me more photos next time! ^_^
Finally l found the homework box!!!
>> Finally! l found the homework box!!!
I love watch musical.
>> I love watching musicals.
My first musical was and my favorite musical is .
>> I will tell you about my first musical was and what my favorite musical is.
In the past, my dream was musical actor.
>> In the past, my dream was to be musical actress.
But, I like and confident to draw. So, someday I want to design musical poster!
>> I like and I am more confident when it comes to drawing. So, someday I want to design a musical poster!
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