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2020-05-20 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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1. I don\'t think we will do is through online everything. Of course, it\'s convenient to do that everything through online. But when human\'s body is comfortable working, human becomes lazy easily. If you\'re a good self-manager, you can do everything though online. But if not, I think you need to moderate outside activities. 2. I guess online transactions are very useful and convenient. You can search product what you want easily on online. It is cheaper than offline products. And you can compare which product is better easily though other people\'s review. But as easy and as comfortable, there are many swindlers on online. They have many ways of fraud. It might be different product that you received from the real that you saw the product photography. It may not be the size you want. There is a way to return and exchange on online transactions however it takes a long time.

강사 첨삭

Thank you An!
~Lucy

I don\'t think we will do is through online everything.
>>CORRECT!
Of course, it\'s convenient to do that everything through online.
>>CORRECT!
But when human\'s body is comfortable working, human becomes lazy easily.
>>CORRECT!
If you\'re a good self-manager, you can do everything though online.
>>If you\'re a good self-manager, you can do everything through online.
But if not, I think you need to moderate outside activities.
>>CORRECT!
I guess online transactions are very useful and convenient.
>>CORRECT!
You can search product what you want easily on online.
>>You can search product what you want easily online.
It is cheaper than offline products.
>>CORRECT!
And you can compare which product is better easily though other people\'s review.
>>And you can compare which product is better easily through other people\'s review.
But as easy and as comfortable, there are many swindlers on online.
>>CORRECT!
They have many ways of fraud.
>>CORRECT!
It might be different product that you received from the real that you saw the product photography.
>>CORRECT!
It may not be the size you want. 
>>CORRECT!
There is a way to return and exchange on online transactions however it takes a long time.
>>CORRECT!

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