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2020-05-26 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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1. I like to watch show programs in the past and natural documentary. There are many funny programs in the past. Therefore, I used to watch famous programs on rerun. And I like to watch natural documentarys. Especially, I like channel which is National Geographic and Discovery. I can\'t see wild animals and space in person. But I can see that through documentary channel 2. I want to do some tracking where is in Japan and Spain. I would like to go on a backpacking trip. Especially, I want to challenge Santiago\'s Pilgrimage Road in Spain. And I hope to go to Japan alone. Because I still have never been abroad. For my first overseas trip, I want to go to Japan which is closest to Korea.

강사 첨삭

Thank you An!
~Lucy

I like to watch show programs in the past and natural documentary.
>>CORRECT!
There are many funny programs in the past.
>>CORRECT!
Therefore, I used to watch famous programs on rerun.
>>Therefore, I used to watch famous programs in rerun.
And I like to watch natural documentarys.
>>And I like to watch natural documentaries.
Especially, I like channel which is National Geographic and Discovery.
>>CORRECT!
I can\'t see wild animals and space in person.
>>CORRECT!
But I can see that through documentary channel
>>CORRECT!
I want to do some tracking where is in Japan and Spain.
>>CORRECT!
I would like to go on a backpacking trip.
>>CORRECT!
Especially, I want to challenge Santiago\'s Pilgrimage Road in Spain.
>>CORRECT!
And I hope to go to Japan alone.
>>CORRECT!
Because I still have never been abroad.
>>CORRECT!
For my first overseas trip, I want to go to Japan which is closest to Korea.
>>CORRECT!

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