homework
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Have you ever helped a neighbor?
I think that I don\'t have any experience in helping my neighbor. In fact, many Koreans are not very familiar with their neighbors. Because most of us live in an apartment and there are only few chances to gather together with them. In my case, I say hello to them when I meet them in the elevator but, if I meet them outside of my apartment I would not recognize them. I heard that we used to get along with each other in the past, but the structure of this society has been changing rapidly, and also citizens\' mindset has been changing to not concerning with strangers.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for sending your answer.
I hope you will still have a good relationship with your neighbors.
I hope you also meet good ones in the future.
I think that I don\'t have any experience in helping my neighbor.
>>CORRECT
OR
>> I think I don\'t have experience helping my neighbor.
In fact, many Koreans are not very familiar with their neighbors.
>> CORRECT
Because most of us live in an apartment and there are only few chances to gather together with them.
>> Most of us live in an apartment so there are only a few chances to meet them.
In my case, I say hello to them when I meet them in the elevator but, if I meet them outside of my apartment I would not recognize them.
>> CORRECT
I heard that we used to get along with each other in the past, but the structure of this society has been changing rapidly, and also citizens\' mindset has been changing to not concerning with strangers.
>> I heard that we used to get along with each other in the past, but the structure of this society has been changing rapidly,and the citizens\' mindsets have been becoming indifferent towards strangers.
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