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학생이 쓴 원문
Seen from my experience,
When someone graduate university is
the best time for looking for a job
Because almost people get a job in that
time
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Hello there, [이름]. :)
Thank you so much for this. :)
- T. Rina ^^
1. Seen from my experience, when someone graduate university is the best time for looking for a job.
>> Based from my experience, the best time to look for a job is when someone graduates from the university.
2. Because almost people get a job in that time.
>> Because almost all people get a job at that time.
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