homework
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Do you like the smell of coffee?
I like the smell of coffee so that I like going to a cafe. During weekends or holidays, I usually spend my time at a cafe. I usually order iced americano and spend my time reading or studying. Sometimes too many people come to the cafe so the place is too loud, then I would go back to my home.
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I like the smell of coffee so that I like going to a cafe.
>>I like the smell of coffee which is why I like going to cafes.
During weekends or holidays, I usually spend my time at a cafe.
>>CORRECT
I usually order iced americano and spend my time reading or studying.
>>CORRECT
Sometimes too many people come to the cafe so the place is too loud, then I would go back to my home.
>>Sometimes, too many people go to the cafe which makes the place too loud , so I go back to my home.
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