Homework
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If I can go anywhere in the world, I want to go to Antarctic. Because I want to see the unique natural scenery of Antarctic with my own eyes. Also, I want to see the penguin flocks which are consist of hundreds of thousands of penguins. At the night of Antarctic, I will take a rest by looking at wonderful aurora. Going to the Antarctic is quite difficult in my country, but I would willing to go there if I have a c[이름]ce.
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Hi~! Good morning Leo~ Happy first day of June! T[이름]ks for completing your homework. Keep it up!
If I can go anywhere in the world, I want to go to Antarctic. Have a good day!
>>> TEACHER JAMES
>>> If I can go anywhere in the world, I want to go to the Antarctic
Because I want to see the unique natural scenery of Antarctic with my own eyes.
>>> CORRECT
Also, I want to see the penguin flocks which are consist of hundreds of thousands of penguins.
>>> CORRECT
At the night of Antarctic, I will take a rest by looking at wonderful aurora.
>>> On the night of Antarctic, I will take a rest by looking at a wonderful aurora.
Going to the Antarctic is quite difficult in my country, but I would willing to go there if I have a c[이름]ce.
>>> Going to the Antarctic is quite difficult in my country, but I would be willing to go there if I have a c[이름]ce.
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