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If you had $100, what would you spend it on?
If I had $100, I would buy an air fryer which is a very convenient machine for cooking. If you use it, you can fry food without oil. All you need to do is put some ingredients in the machine and turn it on. The price depends on the number of liters but normally I can buy it at under $100 so I would buy the machine.
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If I had $100, I would buy an air fryer which is a very convenient machine for cooking.
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If you use it, you can fry food without oil.
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All you need to do is put some ingredients in the machine and turn it on.
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The price depends on the number of liters but normally I can buy it at under $100 so I would buy the machine.
>>CORRECT
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