Homework!!!

2020-06-02 · 첨삭 강사 Oneil

학생이 쓴 원문

I am busy with the assignment. I always do my homework but, it is interesting. Because, my major is what I wanted and I feel powerful and happy when you compliment my pictures. Thank you♥.♥

강사 첨삭

You did not show me your work! :)

I am busy with the assignment.
>> I am busy with assignments.

I always do my homework but, it is interesting.
>> I always do my homework since it is interesting.

Because, my major is what I wanted and I feel powerful and happy when you compliment my pictures.
>> It is because my major is what I wanted and I feel powerful and happy when you compliment my pictures.

Thank you♥.♥
>> Correct.

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