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Which do you think is most difficult: writing in English or speaking in English? Why?
I think speaking in English is more difficult than writing. Firstly, I can correct my sentence after I write but I cannot correct it after I say, and this correction step makes my sentence more natural and sophisticated. Next, if I need to find some expressions and word, I can search it before I write. Thus, I can use more various expressions than speaking. Further more, I can correct my errors on the grammer using while I am writing.
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>> CORRECT.
Firstly, I can correct my sentence after I write but I cannot correct it after I say, and this correction step makes my sentence more natural and sophisticated.
>> Firstly, I can correct my sentence after I write it, but I cannot correct it after I say it; these corrections make my sentence more natural and sophisticated.
Next, if I need to find some expressions and word, I can search it before I write.
>> Next, if I need to find some expressions or words, I can search for it first before I write it.
Thus, I can use more various expressions than speaking.
>>CORRECT
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>> Thus, I can use more various expressions in writing than in speaking.
Further more, I can correct my errors on the grammer using while I am writing.
>> Furthermore, I can correct my grammatical errors while writing.
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