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2011-12-29 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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I saw a funeral cortege of Kim Jung il through TV./Felonious crime is common in American drama./Boscage is bigger than copse./I like chocolate waffle a la mode./Smart Phone is a la mode. Today I overslept again because it was cold my room. I don't want to go out from blanket. Even I want to go into hibernation like bear. How about there? Is there cold? I think every day was same during vacation. Just few things I did is eating and sleeping. Vacation makes me lazy. Every night I decided to study hard. As time passed, I felt nervous. Because I don't have much time. I have only six weeks. If I can't speak English, nobody helps me in Czech. Also I can't find airport, buy something, make friends and take classes. I have to study hard and I will. In that reason, I'll wake up 9a.m. tomorrow. Today I woke up 1p.m. I will be diligent person! Anyway I have a question to you. Why are you choose these words such as corege, felonious, boscage, copse, and a la mode? Do you have special reasons?

강사 첨삭

Hello there my dear.. Thank you so much for dropping in your composition.. Job well done my dear and about your question, I used those words for you to learn something new. Have a good night.. T.Chloe I saw a funeral cortege of Kim Jung il through TV. >>correct! /Felonious crime is common in American drama./ >>correct! Boscage is bigger than copse./ >>correct! I like chocolate waffle a la mode./ >>correct! Smart Phone is a la mode. >>correct!Today I overslept again because it was cold my room. >>correct! I don\'t want to go out from blanket. >>I don\'t wanna go out from my blanket! >>I don\'t wanna remove my balnket. Even I want to go into hibernation like bear. >>Even I want to go into hibernation like a bear. How about there? Is there cold? >>How about in your country, is t cold?I think every day was same during vacation. >>I think everyday is the same during this vacation. Just few things I did is eating and sleeping. >>I did a few things like eating and sleeping. Vacation makes me lazy. >>correct! Every night I decided to study hard. >>correct! As time passed, I felt nervous. >>I feel nervous as time passes by.  Because I don\'t have much time. >>correct! I have only six weeks. >>I only have 6 weeks left. If I can\'t speak English, nobody helps me in Czech >>correct! Also I can\'t find airport, buy something, make friends and take classes. >>correct! I have to study hard and I will. >>correct! In that reason, I\'ll wake up 9a.m. tomorrow. >>correct!  Today I woke up 1p.m. I will be diligent person! >>Today I woke up at 1 pm. and promised to be diligent next time.Anyway I have a question to you. >>correct! Why are you choose these words such as corege, felonious, boscage, copse, and a la mode? Do you have special reasons? >>Why did you choose such words, do you have any special reasons why?

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