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I saw a funeral cortege of Kim Jung il through TV./Felonious crime is common in American drama./Boscage is bigger than copse./I like chocolate waffle a la mode./Smart Phone is a la mode.
Today I overslept again because it was cold my room. I don't want to go out from blanket. Even I want to go into hibernation like bear. How about there? Is there cold?
I think every day was same during vacation. Just few things I did is eating and sleeping. Vacation makes me lazy. Every night I decided to study hard. As time passed, I felt nervous. Because I don't have much time. I have only six weeks. If I can't speak English, nobody helps me in Czech. Also I can't find airport, buy something, make friends and take classes. I have to study hard and I will. In that reason, I'll wake up 9a.m. tomorrow. Today I woke up 1p.m. I will be diligent person!
Anyway I have a question to you. Why are you choose these words such as corege, felonious, boscage, copse, and a la mode? Do you have special reasons?
강사 첨삭
Hello there my dear..
Thank you so much for dropping in your composition..
Job well done my dear and about your question, I used those words for you to learn something new.
Have a good night..
T.Chloe
I saw a funeral cortege of Kim Jung il through TV.
>>correct!
/Felonious crime is common in American drama./
>>correct!
Boscage is bigger than copse./
>>correct!
I like chocolate waffle a la mode./
>>correct!
Smart Phone is a la mode.
>>correct!Today I overslept again because it was cold my room.
>>correct!
I don\'t want to go out from blanket.
>>I don\'t wanna go out from my blanket!
>>I don\'t wanna remove my balnket.
Even I want to go into hibernation like bear.
>>Even I want to go into hibernation like a bear.
How about there? Is there cold?
>>How about in your country, is t cold?I think every day was same during vacation.
>>I think everyday is the same during this vacation.
Just few things I did is eating and sleeping.
>>I did a few things like eating and sleeping.
Vacation makes me lazy.
>>correct!
Every night I decided to study hard.
>>correct!
As time passed, I felt nervous.
>>I feel nervous as time passes by.
Because I don\'t have much time.
>>correct!
I have only six weeks.
>>I only have 6 weeks left.
If I can\'t speak English, nobody helps me in Czech
>>correct!
Also I can\'t find airport, buy something, make friends and take classes.
>>correct!
I have to study hard and I will.
>>correct!
In that reason, I\'ll wake up 9a.m. tomorrow.
>>correct!
Today I woke up 1p.m. I will be diligent person!
>>Today I woke up at 1 pm. and promised to be diligent next time.Anyway I have a question to you.
>>correct!
Why are you choose these words such as corege, felonious, boscage, copse, and a la mode? Do you have special reasons?
>>Why did you choose such words, do you have any special reasons why?
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