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2020-06-05 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

1. He quickly reads a book. (quick) 2. Mandy is a pretty girl. (pretty) 3. The class is terribly loud today. (terrible) 4. Max is a good singer. (good) 5. You can easily open this tin. (easy) 6. It\'s a terrible day today. (terrible) 7. She sings the song good (good) 8. He is a careful driver. (careful) 9. He drives the car carefully. (careful) 10. The dog barks loud . (loud) My favorite movie is the pursuit of happiness. The main character, Chris Gardner, had a difficult time but he does his best in every time. he took care of his son, his clients and did his bosses errands and studies stockes in his spare time. I like to do my best in every time like him. So when I was in college, I did 2 and 3 part-time jobs and did volunteer work on days when I didn’t have a part-time job. Just as he finally became a stockbroker I believe that one day I can do what I want if I do my best in everything like him.

강사 첨삭

Hi Donna! Perfect homework! And nice essay. ^ ^
 I like that movie as well. It encourages people to strive more and become better versions of themselves! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah

1. He quickly reads a book. (quick)
>>CORRECT
2. Mandy is a pretty girl. (pretty)
>>CORRECT
3. The class is terribly loud today. (terrible)
>>CORRECT
4. Max is a good singer. (good)
>>CORRECT
5. You can easily open this tin. (easy)
>>CORRECT
6. It\'s a terrible day today. (terrible)
>>CORRECT
7. She sings the song good (good)
>>CORRECT
8. He is a careful driver. (careful)
>>CORRECT
9. He drives the car carefully. (careful)
>>CORRECT
10. The dog barks loud . (loud)
>>The dog barks loudly.

My favorite movie is the pursuit of happiness. 
>>My favorite movie is \"The Pursuit of Happiness\".
The main character, Chris Gardner, had a difficult time but he does his best in every time. 
>>The main character, Chris Gardner, was having difficult times but he tried to do his best in everything. 
he took care of his son, his clients and did his bosses errands and studies stockes in his spare time. 
>>He took cared of his son, his clients and did his bosses errands and studied stocks in his spare time. 
I like to do my best in every time like him. 
>>I like to do my best in everything and everytime like him.
So when I was in college, I did 2 and 3 part-time jobs and did volunteer work on days when I didn’t have a part-time job. 
>>CORRECT
Just as he finally became a stockbroker I believe that one day I can do what I want if I do my best in everything like him.
>>CORRECT

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