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1.
When I feel lonely, I hang out with my friends or I play alone.
If I meet my friends, we used to play bowling and drink some beers.
Most importantly, I talk with my friends a lot when I feel lonely.
If I was alone, I used to listen to music.
It comforts me a lot.
2.
I think all animals can feel to get sad and lonely.
I have seen a stray cat which is feeling sad.
The kitten was dead on the street.
And there is a mom cat around a kitten which was dead.
The mom cat was crying and was licking a cat which was dead.
Then the mom cat was guarding around a kitten which was dead for a long time.
Therefore, you could easily know animals which get sad and lonely through the animal TV programs.
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~Lucy
When I feel lonely, I hang out with my friends or I play alone.
>>CORRECT!
If I meet my friends, we used to play bowling and drink some beers.
>>CORRECT!If I meet my friends, we used to play bowling and drink some beers.
Most importantly, I talk with my friends a lot when I feel lonely.
>>CORRECT!If I was alone, I used to listen to music.
>>CORRECT!
It comforts me a lot.
It comforts me a lot.
>>CORRECT!
I think all animals can feel to get sad and lonely.
I think all animals can feel to get sad and lonely.
>>CORRECT!
I have seen a stray cat which is feeling sad.
I have seen a stray cat which is feeling sad.
>>CORRECT!
The kitten was dead on the street.
The kitten was dead on the street.
>>CORRECT!
And there is a mom cat around a kitten which was dead.
And there is a mom cat around a kitten which was dead.
>>CORRECT!
The mom cat was crying and was licking a cat which was dead.
The mom cat was crying and was licking a cat which was dead.
>>CORRECT!
Then the mom cat was guarding around a kitten which was dead for a long time.
Then the mom cat was guarding around a kitten which was dead for a long time.
>>CORRECT!
Therefore, you could easily know animals which get sad and lonely through the animal TV programs.
Therefore, you could easily know animals which get sad and lonely through the animal TV programs.
>>CORRECT!
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