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2020-06-10 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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1. When I feel lonely, I hang out with my friends or I play alone. If I meet my friends, we used to play bowling and drink some beers. Most importantly, I talk with my friends a lot when I feel lonely. If I was alone, I used to listen to music. It comforts me a lot. 2. I think all animals can feel to get sad and lonely. I have seen a stray cat which is feeling sad. The kitten was dead on the street. And there is a mom cat around a kitten which was dead. The mom cat was crying and was licking a cat which was dead. Then the mom cat was guarding around a kitten which was dead for a long time. Therefore, you could easily know animals which get sad and lonely through the animal TV programs.

강사 첨삭

Thank you An!
~Lucy

When I feel lonely, I hang out with my friends or I play alone.
>>CORRECT!
If I meet my friends, we used to play bowling and drink some beers.
>>CORRECT!
Most importantly, I talk with my friends a lot when I feel lonely.
>>CORRECT!
If I was alone, I used to listen to music.
>>CORRECT!
It comforts me a lot.
>>CORRECT!
I think all animals can feel to get sad and lonely.
>>CORRECT!
I have seen a stray cat which is feeling sad.
>>CORRECT!
The kitten was dead on the street.
>>CORRECT!
And there is a mom cat around a kitten which was dead.
>>CORRECT!
The mom cat was crying and was licking a cat which was dead.
>>CORRECT!
Then the mom cat was guarding around a kitten which was dead for a long time.
>>CORRECT!
Therefore, you could easily know animals which get sad and lonely through the animal TV programs.
>>CORRECT!

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