homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Do you prefer to have a big breakfast or a light breakfast? Why?
I prefer to have a light breakfast. However, here in Korea, many people have a big breakfast as a traditional custom and my mother also liked to make a big breakfast for my family when I lived with my parents. She cooked steamed rice, soup, main dishes, and she gave me some fruits after the meal. On the other hands, I don\'t eat my breakfast like before anymore. I only have a light breakfast such as oatmeal. Since I\'ve lived alone I don\'t like cooking because I don\'t like to wash dishes and make some garbage.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]~
I also agree.
But, I think it\'s too expensive to keep buying food outside. Hehe
Have a good night~
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However, here in Korea, many people have a big breakfast as a traditional custom and my mother also liked to make a big breakfast for my family when I lived with my parents.
>> CORRECT
She cooked steamed rice, soup, main dishes, and she gave me some fruits after the meal.
>> CORRECT
On the other hands, I don\'t eat my breakfast like before anymore.
>> On the other hand, I don\'t eat my breakfast like before anymore.
I only have a light breakfast such as oatmeal.
>> CORRECT
Since I\'ve lived alone I don\'t like cooking because I don\'t like to wash dishes and make some garbage.
>> Since I live alone, I don\'t like cooking because I don\'t like to wash the dishes and make trash.
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