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2020-06-11 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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1. I was not a student that like Science. But I had to study Science when I was in high school. Because I majored in natural sciences. Therefore, I have studied only study of physics when I was in high school. However, I regretted that I have studied only study of physics when I was in university. Because when I got discharge from the army and I had to study chemical for a certificate. Finally, I got certified. 2. I prefer cold weather to hot weather. Because mostly, there is no insects when it was cold weather. I hate to sweat and especially on my head. And I think the air fresher than hot weather in cold weather.

강사 첨삭

Thank you An!

~Lucy

I was not a student that like Science.

>>I was not a student that liked Science.
But I had to study Science when I was in high school.

>>CORRECT!
Because I majored in natural sciences.

>>Because I majored in Natural Sciences.
Therefore, I have studied only study of physics when I was in high school.

>>Therefore, I have studied only the study of physics when I was in high school.

However, I regretted that I have studied only study of physics when I was in university.

>>However, I regretted that I have only studied physics when I was in university.

Because when I got discharge from the army and I had to study chemical for a certificate.

>>CORRECT!
Finally, I got certified.
>>CORRECT!
I prefer cold weather to hot weather.

>>CORRECT!
Because mostly, there is no insects when it was cold weather.

>>Because mostly, there are no insects when it has cold weather.

I hate to sweat and especially on my head.

>>I hate to sweat, especially on my head.

And I think the air fresher than hot weather in cold weather.

>>And I think the air fresher is better in hot weather than in cold weather.

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