homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Writing Exercise: In 5 sentences, please write your expectations from the class and from the teacher.
In fact, I thought I know a lot of english words, because I keep studing english. but when I try to speak in English what I want to say, there are times when I can\'t think of English words immediately in the process of changing Korean to English , or there are times when I don\'t know what kind of words to use at that time because there are so many similar words. so at that time,It keeps to remid me that I still have a long way to speak well.
Especially, it is not easy to make sentences grammatically correct. So I want to make up for those things from the class, and I want to memorize the English expressions that native speakers often use in real life.
Actually my final goal is to be able to communicate freely with foreigners like you.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thank you for your composition.
Please refer to the suggestions below.
If you have any questions, feel free to ask me in class.
Good job on your first try!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
In fact, I thought I know a lot of english words, because I keep studing english.
>> In fact, I thought I knew a lot of English words, because I kept studying English.
but when I try to speak in English what I want to say, there are times when I can\'t think of English words immediately in the process of changing Korean to English ,
>> However, when I try to speak in English and say what I want to say, there are times when I can\'t think of English words immediately in the process of translating Korean to English.
or there are times when I don\'t know what kind of words to use at that time because there are so many similar words.
>> There are also times when I don\'t know what kind of words to use at that time because there are so many words with similar meanings.
so at that time,It keeps to remid me that I still have a long way to speak well.
>> During such time, I am reminded that I still have a long way to go in order to speak well.
Especially, it is not easy to make sentences grammatically correct.
Especially, it is not easy to make sentences grammatically correct.
>> Especially, it is not easy to make grammatically correct sentences.
So I want to make up for those things from the class, and I want to memorize the English expressions that native speakers often use in real life.
>> That\'s why I want to make up for those things during the class, and I want to memorize English expressions that native speakers often use in real life.
Actually my final goal is to be able to communicate freely with foreigners like you.
Actually my final goal is to be able to communicate freely with foreigners like you.
>> Correct
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