HOMEWORK~!! A)
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1.
Formerly, I have went jeju alone.
There were many tourists especially Chinese in jeju tourist attractions.
There were more foreigners than Koreans in jeju tourist attractions.
At that time, I have though \'why is there so many foreigners in jeju\'.
There are many tourist attractions and activity sports in the limited area of jeju.
You can get to jeju one time flying and you don\'t need to many move in jeju.
All the tourist attractions are nearby.
2.
I think honeymoon depends on money.
The most ideal honeymoon place are Guam and Hawaii.
But I think Japan or Southeast Asia are better than that.
It doesn\'t cost much and you can do many things.
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Thank you An!
~Teacher Lucy
Formerly, I have went jeju alone.
>>Formerly, I have went Jeju alone.
There were many tourists especially Chinese in jeju tourist attractions.
>>There were many tourists especially Chinese in Jeju tourist attractions.
There were more foreigners than Koreans in jeju tourist attractions.
>>There were more foreigners than Koreans in Jeju tourist attractions.
At that time, I have though \'why is there so many foreigners in jeju\'.
>>At that time, I have thought \'why is there so many foreigners in Jeju\'.
There are many tourist attractions and activity sports in the limited area of jeju.
>>There are many tourist attractions and activity sports in the limited area of Jeju.
You can get to jeju one time flying and you don\'t need to many move in jeju.
>>You can get to Jeju one time flying and you don\'t need to move often in Jeju.
All the tourist attractions are nearby.
>>CORRECT!
I think honeymoon depends on money.
>>CORRECT!
The most ideal honeymoon place are Guam and Hawaii.
The most ideal honeymoon place are Guam and Hawaii.
>>CORRECT!
But I think Japan or Southeast Asia are better than that.
But I think Japan or Southeast Asia are better than that.
>>CORRECT!
It doesn\'t cost much and you can do many things.
It doesn\'t cost much and you can do many things.
>>CORRECT!
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