Homework-A hundred dollars for whom.

Composition Writing: Imagine you had a hundred dollars, but you couldn't keep it. You had to give it away to a person or charity. Who would you give it to? What would you want them to do with it? If I would have a hundred dollars and have to give it to whom. Whom I give it to depends on the purpose. If I want to spend the money as the charity, I would give it to big charity like UNICEF. When I donate for UNICEF, I definitely believe that the money will be used for young children all over the world. Of course, it is not enough to help a lot of them. But even it is for some children, I guess that it is valuable. Maybe it could makes them to have a meal or have necessary item.

Hello [이름]! ^^   Thank you in doing the homework~~~ In writing essays, it is recommended know when to go straight to the point rather than to use a lot of unneeded words just to make a longer sentence as well as know when to embellish a statement with details to make your meaning clearer.   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==     If I would have a hundred dollars and have to give it to whom.Whom I give it to depends on the purpose. If I want to spend the money as the charity, I would give it to big charity like UNICEF. >> If I had a hundred dollars but I had to give it away to a person or charity, I would choose to give it to a big charity such as UNICEF.   When I donate for UNICEF, I definitely believe that the money will be usedfor young children all over the world. >> I believe that if I donated the money to UNICEF, it would definitely be used to help young children worldwide.   Of course, it is not enough to help a lot of them.But even it is for some children, I guess that it is valuable. Maybe it could makes them to have a meal or have necessary item. >> Of course, a hundred dollars will not be enough to help all of them but even if only a few are helped, it is still of some worth. The money might be enough to get them a meal or a needed item.