(homework) a time when you lied to your parents, boss, or teacher
학생이 쓴 원문
It\'s a happening that occurs today.
I didn\'t eat the dinner, but I talked to my mom that I did.
The reason why I lied to mom is that I am sullen to her now.
Yesterday when I finished my vacation trip and arrived at home, I got to know that mom quarreled somewhat hard with my daddy.
I could understand why she was angry to him cause I heard the reason from my brother.
But I hate the fighting between my parents. So I lied her and now I\'m keeping silent in my room with doing this homework ha ha.
It will get better teacher. Don\'t worry. I think that a parents\' arguement is frequant event to every offsprings in the world.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^ ^ Thank you for taking the time in doing your homework. I appreciate it a lot! ^ ^
Thank you for opening up and sharing this to me. I really appreciate it. But yes, just like what you have said, it\'s just but normal for parents to have arguments from time to time. Just don\'t think about it too much and be patient with them. Understand your parents and always be supportive with your Mom. ^ ^ It\'s good that you vented out your emotions by doing something productive like doing your homework. Good boy! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
It\'s a happening that occurs today.
>>It\'s something that just happened today/earlier.
I didn\'t eat the dinner, but I talked to my mom that I did.
I didn\'t eat the dinner, but I talked to my mom that I did.
>>I didn\'t eat dinner but I told my parents that I did.
The reason why I lied to mom is that I am sullen to her now.
The reason why I lied to mom is that I am sullen to her now.
>>Correct
Yesterday when I finished my vacation trip and arrived at home, I got to know that mom quarreled somewhat hard with my daddy.
Yesterday when I finished my vacation trip and arrived at home, I got to know that mom quarreled somewhat hard with my daddy.
>>Correct
I could understand why she was angry to him cause I heard the reason from my brother.
I could understand why she was angry to him cause I heard the reason from my brother.
>>I could understand why she was angry at him because my brother told me the reason.
But I hate the fighting between my parents.
But I hate the fighting between my parents.
>>But I hate it when my parents fight.
So I lied her and now I\'m keeping silent in my room with doing this homework ha ha.
>>So, I lied to her and I\'m just being quiet in my room and doing this homework ha ha.
It will get better teacher.
It will get better teacher.
>>Correct
Don\'t worry.
>>Correct
I think that a parents\' arguement is frequant event to every offsprings in the world.
>>I think that it is normal for parents to have arguments and even siblings fight too.
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