Homework(a travel guide book)

Thanks for sharing [이름]! People have different interests in life. And one of the best things to do is travelling.

I think you like travelling too. By reading books and watching videos, it\'s like you already travelled the world.

See you again tomorrow. ^^

~~May~~

The book I will recommend is travel book. Because, travel is a teacher. so we can learn something like famous restaurants, a tourist spot and have a new look.

>> The book I will recommend is a travel book because travel is like a teacher whom we can learn something from. Such places we can go to are famous restaurants, tourist spots and have a sightseeing.

Usually we obtain a guidebook before we go to a new place.

>> Usually, we refer from a travel guide book before we go to a new place.

It is very effective because, Getting and Reading books can be better understood and time can be saved.
>> It is very effective because we can know and understand more things by reading books. Time can also be saved. 
These days, all local governments have their own homepages.

>> These days, all local governments have their own websites.

(Website is a place on the Internet where information is available about a particular subject, organization, etc.)

(Homepage is the main page of the website)

We can get it home by mail whenever we apply for a tour book and a tour map.

>> We can receive it at home by mail after applying for a tour book and a tour map.

We can download it for free or at any time from your home page.
>> Correct sentence
Besides, if we don\'t have enough time and money, we can travel on a travel video at any time on the internet.

>> Besides, if we don\'t have enough time and money, we can still travel by watching travel videos at any time on the internet.

For example, I sometimes travel around the world on the video once a day.

>> I sometimes watch travelling-around-the-world videos.

(Do not put \"once a day\" if you already have used \"sometimes\". Once a day almost means \"every day\".

Every day and sometimes are contradicting words.)

Every day, my dream comes true and I can learn with pleasure through it.

>> Correct sentence