Homework (about COVID-19)
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Corona Virus has been seriously affecting on our life. Thanks to Corona Virus, I got much stressed with the fact that I can\'t do anything as usual. I believe there has been only a few people have enjoyed being in workplace, going to school and having a test before it was started. We had no choice but to spend 24hours at home. During this time, I figured out that the time we have spent at school, workplace was much more meaningful than I thought.
It\'s said that people are social animals. We should meet, talk, work, study \"together\" so that we could live together. That\'s exactly what human being means.
It might take a while to be relieved. But We\'ll have to win against bad things. We should make sure that find a better way to get the most out of keeping hygiene level. We can proceed every class, working with using smartphone instead of going the place in person. When we go out, must get a mask, and hand sanitizer to name a few. If we do like this carefully, we can take our life back
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1. Corona Virus has been seriously affecting on our life.
>>Corona virus has been seriously affecting our life.
2. Thanks to Corona Virus, I got much stressed with the fact that I can\'t do anything as usual.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Thanks to corona virus, I got much stressed with the fact that I can\'t do anything as it used to be.
3. I believe there has been only a few people have enjoyed being in workplace, going to school and having a test before it was started.
>>I believe there has been only a few people who have enjoyed being in the workplace, going to school and having a test before it has started.
4. We had no choice but to spend 24hours at home.
>>CORRECT
OR>>We had no choice but to spend the whole time at home.
5. During this time, I figured out that the time we have spent at school, workplace was much more meaningful than I thought.
>>During this time, I figured out that the time we have spent in school, workplace was much more meaningful than I ever thought before.
6. It\'s said that people are social animals.
>>CORRECT
OR>>They said that people are social animals.
7. We should meet, talk, work, study \"together\" so that we could live together.
>>CORRECT
OR>>We should spend time with each other talking, working, studying \"together\" so that we could live together.
8. That\'s exactly what human being means.
>>CORRECT
OR>>That\'s exactly what a human being is.
9. It might take a while to be relieved.
>>It might take a while to be relieved from this virus.
10. But We\'ll have to win against bad things.
>>But we\'ll have to win against bad things.
11. We should make sure that find a better way to get the most out of keeping hygiene level.
>>We should make sure to find a better way to get the most out of keeping our hygiene.
12. We can proceed every class, working with using smartphone instead of going the place in person.
>>We can proceed to every class, working using smartphone instead of going to the place in person.
13. When we go out, must get a mask, and hand sanitizer to name a few.
>>When we go out, we must get a mask and hand sanitizer to name a few.
14. If we do like this carefully, we can take our life back
>>If we do it like this carefully, we can take our life back.
Very good sentences.
- T. Melody^^
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