Homework about museum

2014-08-04 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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I went to British museum in London, Metropolitan museum in New York, Louvre museum in Paris already where are called the top 3 museums in the world by people. Why does lots of people go to museum? Because, They really want to appreciate a masterpieces. That places are simply amazing, incredible, fantastic, wonderful. That was unforgettable accidents for me. Probably...I won't go there again. Because, it remains other countries where I didn't go yet.

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Hi there, Ms. [Name]^^ I am so glad you have been to a lot of museums around the world! And I envy you! Thanks for doing your homework and I am looking forward to receive more of this! Have a great week! See you later! I went to British museum in London, Metropolitan museum in New York, Louvre museum in Paris already where are called the top 3 museums in the world by people. >>I have already been to British museum in London, Metropolitan Museum in New York, Louvre Museum in Paris which are called by people as the top 3 museums in the world.Why does lots of people go to museum? >>Why do lots of people go to museum?Because, They really want to appreciate a masterpieces. >>Because, they really want to appreciate masterpiece. That places are simply amazing, incredible, fantastic, wonderful. >>Those places are simply amazing, incredible, fantastic and wonderful. That was unforgettable accidents for me. >>Those were unforgettable situations for me. Probably...I won\'t go there again. >>CORRECT!Because, it remains other countries where I didn\'t go yet. >>Because there are still other countries where I have not been to.  

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