Homework(about my previous job)

I have been working as a soldier for about 6 years. For that period, I have experienced an role of the company commander for 80 to 90 privates as well as the staff to support my superior commander. When I was the company commander, I should manage all about my privates such as what to train them, what to eat them. I think that it was the most difficult and precious experience that I had. However, supporting my superior commander was also difficult job. Because my superior commander managed bigger troops than mine, as the staff to support him, I needed to understand and follow his thought. I should think like him. I think that both experiences of the leader and the follower made me the more talented candidate.

Hi Mac! You gave good information on your composition today. Were you answering the question: \"What makes you the most qualified person for the job?\"  or \"What makes you stand out from all the other applicants?\" If you were, then the following answer could be appropriate but if your were trying to answer the homework I gave you last time then this answer will not be correct. Anyway, let\'s talk about this later in class. ^^ T. Aurora I have been working as a soldier for about 6 years. >>Correct! For that period, I have experienced an role of the company commander for 80 to 90 privates as well as the staff to support my superior commander. >>During that period, I experienced being the company commander for 80 to 90 privates as well as the staffs to support my superior commander. When I was the company commander, I should manage all about my privates such as what to train them, what to eat them. >>When I was the company commander, I managed, trained  and taught the privates what to eat as well.  I think that it was the most difficult and precious experience that I had. >>Correct!  However, supporting my superior commander was also difficult job. >> However, supporting my superior commander was also a fficult job.  Because my superior commander managed bigger troops than mine, as the staff to support him, I needed to understand and follow his thought. >>Because my superior commander managed bigger troops than mine and as the staff who should support him, I needed to understand and follow his thoughts. I should think like him. >>Correct! I think that both experiences of the leader and the follower made me the more talented candidate. >>I think that having both the experiences of becoming the leader and the follower made me the most qualified candidate.