Homework(about recommending my previous job)

2013-02-26 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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First of all, I'm truly impressed by your efforts to find a helpful article for me. That article allowed me to consider the view of interviewer. I'm really appreciate of it. Q. Would you ever recommend anyone to work in your previous job? A. I have never recommended anyone to work in my job, the army. I didn't need to recommend being a soldier, because all of korean men must spend around 2 years as a soldier. It's one of our duties as a member of a nation. They can experience firsthand whether a soldier as a job fits in themselves. In my private opinion, serving the country we live in is not the matter of a choice but a noble duty.

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It\'s a wonderfully smooth day today. ^^ I happened to stumble upon that article while I was surfing the internet and thought to share it with you. So it\'s no problem at all. :) Talk to you later. T. Aurora First of all, I\'m truly impressed by your efforts to find a helpful article for me. >>Correct!  That article allowed me to consider the view of interviewer. >>That article allowed me to consider the view of an interviewer.  I\'m really appreciate of it.>>I really appreciate it.Q. Would you ever recommend anyone to work in your previous job?A. I have never recommended anyone to work in my job, the army. >>I have never recommended anyone to work in my job.  I didn\'t need to recommend being a soldier, because all of korean men must spend around 2 years as a soldier. >> I don\'t have to recommend people to be a soldier, because all Korean men must spend around 2 years as a soldier  It\'s one of our duties as a member of a nation. >>It\'s one of our duties as a member of this nation. They can experience firsthand whether a soldier as a job fits in themselves. >>They can experience firsthand whether a soldier, as a job, fit themselves. In my private opinion, serving the country we live in is not the matter of a choice but a noble duty. >>In my private opinion, serving the country we live in is not a matter of a choice but a noble duty.   **You may also say: I have never recommended anyone to work in my job since most Korean men have to serve the military for 2 years. However, if I would ever be asked for advice by anyone, then I would strongly recommend them to serve their nation. In my private opinion, serving their country we live in is not a matter of a choice but a noble duty.

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