Homework after a long time.....|(*^0^*)/
학생이 쓴 원문
Now my the greatest goal(challenge) is transfer to another university.
Of coure I like my school. But, my university has a 2 year system. I think 2 year of my design study is too short.
So, I chose the school that I want to go to and the need my TOEIC score and portfolio, school records.
I confident for my school records but I warried about TOEIC score... Now I study TOEIC everyday. It doesn\'t work as well as I thought.
강사 첨삭
I think everything is going to be okay.
Now my the greatest goal(challenge) is transfer to another university.
>> Now my the greatest goal is to transfer to another university.
Of coure I like my school. But, my university has a 2 year system. I think 2 year of my design study is too short.
>> Of course I like my school. But, my university has a 2 year system. I think 2 years of study design is too short.
So, I chose the school that I want to go to and the need my TOEIC score and portfolio, school records.
>> So, I chose the school where I want to go to. I will need a TOEIC score, portfolio, and school records.
I confident for my school records but I warried about TOEIC score... Now I study TOEIC everyday. It doesn\'t work as well as I thought.
>> I am confident about my school records but I am worried about my TOEIC score. I am studying TOEIC every day. It isn\'t working as well as I thought.
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