Homework after a long time^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you remember that I described my home as a shelter because I can be comfortable?
To cool down myself after a busy day, first I go back to my house as fast as possible.
And when I get home, I wash my hand and also erase my makeup.
Then I change my clothes. And find a place where I'd like to sit or lie. Where I'd like to sit or lie is usually different depending on my feelings on each day. Then I feel comfortable gradually.
To tell the truth, these are the steps for me to take a nap whenever I'd like to.kkkk
I think if it's a busy day, I must be exhausted and worn out.
For me, going to bed early is the most effective way to cool down myself.
As I check whether there are any errors above, I think I wrote too particular details like I was talking about taking a subway at rush hour this morning.
Lastly, I'm also VERY VERY happy to be your student again!:)
When I called powerEnglish before to change time, they told me you're a super popular teacher.kkk
It's true.kkk Bye;)
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름] my dear~~
Thank you very much for flattering me so much here. haha!
I really feel so grateful that you tried to find ways to still be in my class to the point of waking up early in the morning.
That\'s a great effort and sacrifice so I am very happy about it too.
I wish we could enjoy having classes all the time!
Have a nice day~~~
T.Kristel-
Do you remember that I described my home as a shelter because I can be comfortable?
>> Do you remember that I described my home as a shelter where I can be comfortable?To cool down myself after a busy day, first I go back to my house as fast as possible.
>> CORRECT!!And when I get home, I wash my hand and also erase my makeup.
>> And when I get home, I wash my hand and remove my makeup.Then I change my clothes. And find a place where I\'d like to sit or lie.
>> CORRECT!! CORRECT!!
Where I\'d like to sit or lie is usually different depending on my feelings on each day. Then I feel comfortable gradually.
>> Where I\'d like to sit or lie is usually different depending on my feelings each day. CORRECT!!
To tell the truth, these are the steps for me to take a nap whenever I\'d like to.kkkk
>> CORRECT!!I think if it\'s a busy day, I must be exhausted and worn out.
>> CORRECT!! CORRECT!!For me, going to bed early is the most effective way to cool down myself.
>> CORRECT!!As I check whether there are any errors above, I think I wrote too particular details like I was talking about taking a subway at rush hour this morning.
>> CORRECT!!Lastly, I\'m also VERY VERY happy to be your student again!:)
>> CORRECT!!When I called powerEnglish before to change time, they told me you\'re a super popular teacher.kkk
>> CORRECT!!It\'s true.kkk Bye;)
>> CORRECT!!
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