Homework after a long time^^

2014-03-12 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

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Do you remember that I described my home as a shelter because I can be comfortable? To cool down myself after a busy day, first I go back to my house as fast as possible. And when I get home, I wash my hand and also erase my makeup. Then I change my clothes. And find a place where I'd like to sit or lie. Where I'd like to sit or lie is usually different depending on my feelings on each day. Then I feel comfortable gradually. To tell the truth, these are the steps for me to take a nap whenever I'd like to.kkkk I think if it's a busy day, I must be exhausted and worn out. For me, going to bed early is the most effective way to cool down myself. As I check whether there are any errors above, I think I wrote too particular details like I was talking about taking a subway at rush hour this morning. Lastly, I'm also VERY VERY happy to be your student again!:) When I called powerEnglish before to change time, they told me you're a super popular teacher.kkk It's true.kkk Bye;)

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름] my dear~~ Thank you very much for flattering me so much here. haha! I really feel so grateful that you tried to find ways to still be in my class to the point of waking up early in the morning. That\'s a great effort  and sacrifice so I am very happy about it too. I wish we could enjoy having classes all the time! Have a nice day~~~ T.Kristel- Do you remember that I described my home as a shelter because I can be comfortable? >> Do you remember that I described my home as a shelter where I can be comfortable?To cool down myself after a busy day, first I go back to my house as fast as possible. >> CORRECT!!And when I get home, I wash my hand and also erase my makeup. >> And when I get home, I wash my hand and remove my makeup.Then I change my clothes. And find a place where I\'d like to sit or lie. >> CORRECT!! CORRECT!! Where I\'d like to sit or lie is usually different depending on my feelings on each day. Then I feel comfortable gradually. >>  Where I\'d like to sit or lie is usually different depending on my feelings each day.  CORRECT!! To tell the truth, these are the steps for me to take a nap whenever I\'d like to.kkkk >> CORRECT!!I think if it\'s a busy day, I must be exhausted and worn out. >> CORRECT!! CORRECT!!For me, going to bed early is the most effective way to cool down myself. >> CORRECT!!As I check whether there are any errors above, I think I wrote too particular details like I was talking about taking a subway at rush hour this morning. >>  CORRECT!!Lastly, I\'m also VERY VERY happy to be your student again!:) >> CORRECT!!When I called powerEnglish before to change time, they told me you\'re a super popular teacher.kkk >> CORRECT!!It\'s true.kkk Bye;) >> CORRECT!!

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