homework again.
학생이 쓴 원문
I have to think a lots because of my homework.
It is very difficult to me.
It is difficult to express my idea in English.
Here is my homework.
I often searched on the internet through my phone.
For example, I read these days news, studied a vocabulary and found out a lot of information.
Also, I saved my friends' information in my phone.
When I left my phone at home, I was getting on my nerves all day.
In my opinion,Technology are very important and comfortable.
But they can change our life lazily.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thank you so much for making your homework. I appreciate your effort in making this.
I understand that learning English and expressing yourself in English is very hard.
Though it\'s hard, you should not give up on it, okay. You should think positively.
In time, you will be a good English speaker. All you have to do is to keep
practicing. I believe in you, [이름].
Do your best and God will do the rest.
Take care and have a good day. ^^
~~Teacher Kris
I have to think a lots because of my homework.
>> I have to think a lot about my homework.It is very difficult to me.
>> CorrectIt is difficult to express my idea in English.
>> CorrectHere is my homework.
I often searched on the internet through my phone.
>> I often searched on the internet or through my phone.For example, I read these days news, studied a vocabulary and found out a lot of information.
>> For example, I read daily news updates, study vocabularies and find out a lot of information.Also, I saved my friends\' information in my phone.
>> Also, I save my friends\' information in my phone.When I left my phone at home, I was getting on my nerves all day.
>> Whenever I left my phone at home, I get nervous all day.In my opinion,Technology are very important and comfortable.
>> CorrectBut they can change our life lazily.
>> But they can change our life to be lazy.
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