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2014-12-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

학생이 쓴 원문

This topic, "An intelligent person is an educated person.", seems so interesting. What is your opinion about it? Education people can express their ideas with thier knowledge. So I think that education is very important. But sometimes, some education people use to trick with their knowledge to half educated people. In my opinion, education people have to help many poor people and half educated people with their knowledge.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^ How are you? Thank you sharing your ideas and opinion about the topic. Well, you are right that some people who are educated trick other people. That kind of attitude is not good. So, you have to use your knowledge to help others and not to trick them, okay. Thank you so much and have a nice day ahead :) ~~Teacher Kris Education people can express their ideas with thier knowledge. >> Educated people can express their ideas with their knowledge.So I think that education is very important. >> So, I think Education is very important. But sometimes, some education people use to trick with their knowledge to half educated people. >> But sometimes, some educated people use their knowledge to trick others.In my opinion, education people have to help many poor people and half educated people with their knowledge. >> In my opinion, educated people have to help other poor people and uneducated ones to develop their knowledge.

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