homework again.

What is your opinion about this topic, "It is important to keep up with the latest fashions."? I envy them who are to keep up with the latest fashions. I want to keep up with the latest fashions but I can't do it because I am really lazy. I think that they who are to keep up it are very diligent. They collect a lot of information of fashions and they will try to keep up with the latest fashions. Maybe they will be to spend enjoyable time to collect information. If I would spend time to collect information, maybe I would think waste of time.

Hi [이름]! ^^ Well, there is no need to keep up with the latest fashions because it is not even important. We dress ourselves in a comfortable way. We have our own fashion. We have our own ideas on how to dress ourselves to look good. Anyway, we have different opinions. kk. :)   Please study the following corrections below, okay.  Have a great day! ^^ Take care! ^^   ~~Teacher Kris   I envy them who are to keep up with the latest fashions. >> I envy those people who keep up with the latest fashions.I want to keep up with the latest fashions but I can\'t do it because I am really lazy. >> CorrectI think that they who are to keep up it are very diligent. >> I think that they who are keeping up with it are very diligent.They collect a lot of information of fashions and they will try to keep up with the latest fashions. >> CorrectMaybe they will be to spend enjoyable time to collect information. >> Maybe they spend enjoyable time collecting information.If I would spend time to collect information, maybe I would think waste of time. >> If I would spend time collecting information, maybe I would only waste my time.