homework and blog
학생이 쓴 원문
I always visit my sister on Sundays./Why do you insist on going to Spain? We went there last year./Cars left on the street are susceptible to theft./I'm a policeman and I'm usually off duty at Christmas.
Where's Peter? Is he _____ sick again?(I think "Is he sick again" is completed. I don't know what I add this blacket.)
I have only 11 postings in my blog. I'll upload postings about my experience which I want to remember. Actually I wanted to write paper diary, but I was too lazy to write characters by pen. For that reason, I began blog. Writing in the Internet is convenient. Sometimes I save files in my blog. If I save the photos in my computer, I can't recover my photos when my computer is break down. Most of all, It is possible to write with photos. If I want to write diary with photos, I have to print all photos. Of course, I can't print all photos. However, I'm sick of blog even though I started blog only few days ago.
here is the link: http://blog.naver.com/dreamy_pen.do
강사 첨삭
Hi there my dear Isabel! Thank you for sharing me this composition. I already checked your blog site and I like it! Good job! Anyway, I will talk to you later my dear. Hugs and kisses.
-Teacher Chloe
I always visit my sister on Sundays.
>>Correct
Why do you insist on going to Spain? We went there last year.
>>>> Why do you insist of going to Spain? We went there last year.
Cars left on the street are susceptible to theft.
>>Correct
I\'m a policeman and I\'m usually off duty at Christmas.
>>CorrectWhere\'s Peter? Is he _____ sick again?
>> Where\'s Peter? Is he of sick again?
(I think \"Is he sick again\" is completed. I don\'t know what I add this blacket.)
>>I think \'Is he sick again\' is a complete sentence. I don\'t know what to answer.I have only 11 postings in my blog.
>>Correct
>> I have 11 postings in my blog.
I\'ll upload postings about my experience which I want to remember.
>>I will upload my writings about my experience which I want to remember.
Actually I wanted to write paper diary, but I was too lazy to write characters by pen.
>>Actually, I wanted to have a journal but I am too lazy to write using a pen.
For that reason, I began blog. Writing in the Internet is convenient. Sometimes I save files in my blog.
>>That was the reason why I started to post my blogs on line. It is easier and more convenient. I am using my blog too to save my files.
If I save the photos in my computer, I can\'t recover my photos when my computer is break down.
>>In that way I have back up file to use when my computer is not properly working.
Most of all, It is possible to write with photos.
>>Also, it is possible to write with photos.
If I want to write diary with photos, I have to print all photos.
>>Unlike in a journal, I have to print out photos.
Of course, I can\'t print all photos.
>>Correct
However, I\'m sick of blog even though I started blog only few days ago.
>>However, I am already sick of posting blogs thought I just started only a few days ago.here is the link: http://blog.naver.com/dreamy_pen.do
>>Check my blog site. Here is the link http://blog.naver.com/dreamy_pen.do.
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