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2012-01-13 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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I always visit my sister on Sundays./Why do you insist on going to Spain? We went there last year./Cars left on the street are susceptible to theft./I'm a policeman and I'm usually off duty at Christmas. Where's Peter? Is he _____ sick again?(I think "Is he sick again" is completed. I don't know what I add this blacket.) I have only 11 postings in my blog. I'll upload postings about my experience which I want to remember. Actually I wanted to write paper diary, but I was too lazy to write characters by pen. For that reason, I began blog. Writing in the Internet is convenient. Sometimes I save files in my blog. If I save the photos in my computer, I can't recover my photos when my computer is break down. Most of all, It is possible to write with photos. If I want to write diary with photos, I have to print all photos. Of course, I can't print all photos. However, I'm sick of blog even though I started blog only few days ago. here is the link: http://blog.naver.com/dreamy_pen.do

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear Isabel!  Thank you for sharing me this composition. I already checked your blog site and I like it! Good job! Anyway, I will talk to you later my dear. Hugs and kisses. -Teacher Chloe I always visit my sister on Sundays. >>Correct Why do you insist on going to Spain? We went there last year. >>>> Why do you insist of going to Spain? We went there last year. Cars left on the street are susceptible to theft. >>Correct I\'m a policeman and I\'m usually off duty at Christmas. >>CorrectWhere\'s Peter? Is he _____ sick again? >> Where\'s Peter? Is he of sick again?  (I think \"Is he sick again\" is completed. I don\'t know what I add this blacket.) >>I think \'Is he sick again\' is a complete sentence. I don\'t know what to answer.I have only 11 postings in my blog. >>Correct >> I have 11 postings in my blog. I\'ll upload postings about my experience which I want to remember. >>I will upload my writings about my experience which I want to remember.  Actually I wanted to write paper diary, but I was too lazy to write characters by pen. >>Actually, I wanted to have a journal but I am too lazy to write using a pen. For that reason, I began blog. Writing in the Internet is convenient. Sometimes I save files in my blog. >>That was the reason why I started to post my blogs on line. It is easier and more convenient. I am using my blog too to save my files. If I save the photos in my computer, I can\'t recover my photos when my computer is break down. >>In that way I have back up file to use when my computer is not properly working. Most of all, It is possible to write with photos. >>Also, it is possible to write with photos.  If I want to write diary with photos, I have to print all photos. >>Unlike in a journal, I have to print out photos. Of course, I can\'t print all photos. >>Correct However, I\'m sick of blog even though I started blog only few days ago. >>However, I am already sick of posting blogs thought I just started only a few days ago.here is the link: http://blog.naver.com/dreamy_pen.do >>Check my blog site. Here is the link http://blog.naver.com/dreamy_pen.do.  

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