Homework and caractor
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good evening [이름]!
Wow! Thank you so much for doing your homework.
I enjoyed our class today.
Thank you for sharing with me your favorite cartoon character.
I appreciate it a lot.
You did a great job today. Please go over the corrections below.
See you tomorrow. Good night and take care.
Teacher Nina
Today, I talk to nina teacher about caracter.
>> I talked about character today with Teacher Nina.
My worst friend\'s favorite caracter is Pororo.
>> correct [please check the spelling: character]
But I don\'t like Pororo. Because it\'s childish.
>> correct
>> Better: I don\'t like Pororo because it is childish.
OK. Now, answer the following questions.
>> Okay. Now, I will answer the following questions.
1. Who\'s your favorite cartoon caractor?
My favorite cartoon caractor is carbot.
>> correct
>> OR: My favorite cartoon character is Carbot.
What are other answers to this question?
>> The cartoon character that I like the most is Carbot.
2. Why is he your favorite?
Because He\'s lovely and cute.
>> It is because it is lovely and cute.
What are other answers to this question?
>> I like Carbot because it is cute and attractive.
Answer it and see you in next class! Bye!
>> Answer it and see you in our next class. Bye.
>> OR: Kindly check it and see you in our next class. Goodbye.
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