Homework and caractor

2018-10-22 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

Today, I talk to nina teacher about caracter. My worst friend's favorite caracter is Pororo. But I don't like Pororo. Because it's childish. OK. Now, answer the following questions. 1. Who's your favorite cartoon caractor? My favorite cartoon caractor is carbot. What are other answers to this question? 2. Why is he your favorite? Because He's lovely and cute. What are other answers to this question? Answer it and see you in next class! Bye!

강사 첨삭

Good evening [이름]!
Wow! Thank you so much for doing your homework.
I enjoyed our class today.
Thank you for sharing with me your favorite cartoon character.
I appreciate it a lot.

You did a great job today. Please go over the corrections below.
See you tomorrow. Good night and take care.


Teacher Nina


Today, I talk to nina teacher about caracter.

>> I talked about character today with Teacher Nina.


My worst friend\'s favorite caracter is Pororo.

>> correct [please check the spelling: character]


But I don\'t like Pororo. Because it\'s childish. 

>> correct

>> Better: I don\'t like Pororo because it is childish.

OK. Now, answer the following questions.

>> Okay. Now, I will answer the following questions.

1. Who\'s your favorite cartoon caractor?

My favorite cartoon caractor is carbot.
>> correct

>> OR: My favorite cartoon character is Carbot.


What are other answers to this question?
>> The cartoon character that I like the most is Carbot. 


2. Why is he your favorite?

Because He\'s lovely and cute.
>> It is because it is lovely and cute. 


What are other answers to this question?

>> I like Carbot because it is cute and attractive.

Answer it and see you in next class! Bye!

>> Answer it and see you in our next class. Bye.

>> OR: Kindly check it and see you in our next class. Goodbye.

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