homework and composition

2012-11-26 · 첨삭 강사 Louis

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello! Teacher Louise ! homework 1) Our friends must also write a test. (also) 2) I was only joking. (only) 3) Did you both enjoy the flight? (both) 4) Mary hardly ever watches TV. (hardly) (ever) 5) He carefully drives his car. (carefully) 6) The children play football in the garden. (in the garden) 7) We went to the cinema yesterday. (yesterday) 8) John almost fell off the bike. (almost) 9) Her boyfriend will probably buy her some flowers. (probably) 10) My uncle is definitely moving to Stockholm soon. (definitely) composition My children stuck to me. He was discarded from his parents. After the last time when he went to jail, he decided to be good. He got a car accident. My son usually takes a nap for two hours. I got to work a few minutes ago. "Cut coners" has a bad meaning. I was a salaried doctor. I am so late. Have a nice dream. See you tomorrow. Regards, [이름]

강사 첨삭

Hey there! Thank you for sacrificing your time to do your homework. ^^ You almost got a perfect score on your homework! Good job! Anyway, please check my correction on your composition. I\'ll see you again tomorrow! Take care Teacher Louis ^^ Hello! Teacher Louise !homework1) Our friends must also write a test. (also) >>>Correct!2) I was only joking. (only)>>>Correct!3) Did you both enjoy the flight? (both)>>>Correct!4) Mary hardly ever watches TV. (hardly) (ever)>>>Correct!5) He carefully drives his car. (carefully)>>>He drives his car carefully.6) The children play football in the garden. (in the garden)>>>Correct!7) We went to the cinema yesterday. (yesterday)>>>Correct!8) John almost fell off the bike. (almost)>>>Correct!9) Her boyfriend will probably buy her some flowers. (probably)>>>Correct!10) My uncle is definitely moving to Stockholm soon. (definitely)>>>Correct!compositionMy children stuck to me.>>>My children are stuck with me.He was discarded from his parents.>>>He was separated from his parents.After the last time when he went to jail, he decided to be good.>>>Correct!He got a car accident.>>>He had a car accident.My son usually takes a nap for two hours.>>>Correct!I got to work a few minutes ago.>>>Correct! >>>OR: I arrived at work a few minutes ago.\"Cut coners\" has a bad meaning.>>>Correct!I was a salaried doctor.>>>I used to be a doctor.I am so late. >>>Correct!Have a nice dream. >>>Correct!See you tomorrow.>>>Correct!Regards,[이름]

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