Homework and diary.
학생이 쓴 원문
1) The students have booked a flight to Vienna. (to book)
2) The cat have just cought a mouse. (just/to catch)
3) Jack and Brian have drawn this picture. (to draw)
4) He has already invited his friends. (already/to invite)
5) Julia has made a table with three columns. (to make)
6) My friends have passed the Geography test. (to pass)
7) I have just fed the rabbits. (just/to feed)
8) The baby hedgehogs have drunken the water. They are sleeping now. (to drink)
9) The teacher has lost the keys, so he can't open the door. (to lose)
10) We already have downloaded the worksheets. (already/to download)
On saturday, I had a birthday party with my friends. One of my friends' birthday is really close. So we had a party together. On birthday, we always drink a lot. And have a fun time with friends. We have known each other for 15 years. We were classmate at high school. It's been a long time. So we know and understand each other.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Ms. [이름]!
Thanks for spending some time for your homework and for sharing about what you did last weekend.
I think you are being sorrounded by good friends! ^^
You almost got your homework perfect!
Keep it up.
T. Rowena
1) The students have booked a flight to Vienna. (to book)
>>correct!2) The cat have just cought a mouse. (just/to catch)
>>correct!3) Jack and Brian have drawn this picture. (to draw)
>>correct!4) He has already invited his friends. (already/to invite) >>correct!
5) Julia has made a table with three columns. (to make)
>>correct!6) My friends have passed the Geography test. (to pass)
>>correct!7) I have just fed the rabbits. (just/to feed)
>>correct!8) The baby hedgehogs have drunken the water. They are sleeping now. (to drink)
>>The baby hedgehogs have drunk the water. They are sleeping now. 9) The teacher has lost the keys, so he can\'t open the door. (to lose)
>>correct!10) We already have downloaded the worksheets. (already/to download)
>>correct!On saturday, I had a birthday party with my friends.
>>correct! // Saturday// It should be capitalized.
One of my friends\' birthday is really close.
>>correct!
So we had a party together.
>>correct!
On birthday, we always drink a lot.
>>On birthdays, we always drink a lot.
And have a fun time with friends.
>>correct!
>> OR And have a blast with friends.
We have known each other for 15 years.
>>correct!
We were classmate at high school. It\'s been a long time.
>>We were classmates in high school. It\'s been a long time.
So we know and understand each other.
>>correct!
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