Homework and email
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. Thank you for sending this in. Relieving stress is very important for you to keep working productively. Good luck. Regarding the e-mail, I hope the corrections help. See you in class. Have a good day!
- T. Beth
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Q: How do you try to feel better after a long stressful day at work?
Sometimes I felt much stress in the office and after work I couldn\'t sleep until late.
>>>> Sometimes, I feel too much stress in the office that even after work I couldn\'t sleep until late at night.
I usually work off one\'s stress every time.
>>>> I usually work on my stress every time.
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I wrote an e-mail to the head office manager on yesterday.
>>>> I wrote an e-mail to the head office manager yesterday.
Would you please visit my customer following schedule?
>>>> Would you please visit my customer following the set schedule?
Early development was finished with the GDS support.
>>>> CORRECT.
>>>> OR: The early development finished with the support of GDS.
There has been a delayed in development due to mismatched End-customers motor spec but they decided to make changes some motor condition in recently.
>>>> There has been a delay in development due to mismatched End-customers motor spec but they decided to make changes on some motor condition recently.
They’d like to discussion about future development and we should check for detail.
>>>> They’d like to discuss about future development and we should check for details.
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