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2018-09-12 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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- How do yo try to feel better after a long stressful day at work? Sometimes I felt much stress in the office and after work I couldn't sleep until late. I usually work off one's stress every time. I wrote an e-mail to the head office manager on yesterday. Would you please visit my customer following schedule? Early development was finished with the GDS support. There has been a delayed in development due to mismatched End-customers motor spec but they decided to make changes some motor condition in recently. They’d like to discussion about future development and we should check for detail.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]. Thank you for sending this in. Relieving stress is very important for you to keep working productively. Good luck. Regarding the e-mail, I hope the corrections help. See you in class. Have a good day!

- T. Beth

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Q: How do you try to feel better after a long stressful day at work?
Sometimes I felt much stress in the office and after work I couldn\'t sleep until late.

>>>>  Sometimes, I feel too much stress in the office that even after work I couldn\'t sleep until late at night.  

I usually work off one\'s stress every time.

>>>>  I usually work on my stress every time. 

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 I wrote an e-mail to the head office manager on yesterday.
>>>>   I wrote an e-mail to the head office manager yesterday.
 Would you please visit my customer following schedule?

>>>>   Would you please visit my customer following the set schedule?   
 Early development was finished with the GDS support.

>>>>  CORRECT.

>>>> OR: The early development finished with the support of GDS.   
There has been a delayed in development due to mismatched End-customers motor spec but they decided to make changes some motor condition in recently.

>>>>  There has been a delay in development due to mismatched End-customers motor spec but they decided to make changes on some motor condition recently.

They’d like to discussion about future development and we should check for detail.

>>>>  They’d like to discuss about future development and we should check for details.     

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