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2015-10-06 · 첨삭 강사 Carmen

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Say something about true love in a maximum of 5 sentences. I think true love is the act which is respect each other. And always support each other and take care of each other. Eventhough I didn't experience the true love in my life yet, but I think we don't have to get hurry to make love or meet someone new. Love will come someday. Even if love isn't come, we received a lot of love from our family, so I think that is fully enough. This is the link of the "She was pretty". some homepages indicated it "She was beautiful". I found the site which support the End sub!! Google is the best site. When you find some videoes, I recommend you to use Google. HAHAHA. Enjoy!! >_< http://myasiantv.se/drama/she-was-pretty/episode-1/

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A great evening to you, [이름]!! :) Thank you for sharing your idea of wht true love is. I totally agree with your idea! Good job!! Like what it says in the Bible,    \"Love is patient. Love is kind. Love doesn\'t envy. It does not boast. It is not proud. It is not rude. It is not self-seeking.  It is not easily angered. It keeps no record of wrongs.Love does not in evil but rejoices for the truth. It always trusts, always hopes and always perseveres. Love never fails.\"    So I hope that someday you will find that kind of love because I know you are a very genuine person! Thank you for being my student, sister and friend!! Saranghe!! <3   Thank you very much for sharing the link with me too. Oh, I\'m so excited to watch the episodes of \"She was Pretty\". ^^  I will let you know if I watched it! Have a good night! See you tomorrow!!   Teacher Carmen ^^   HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Say something about true love in a maximum of 5 sentences. I think true love is the act which is respect each other. >> I think true love requires the act of respecting each other.   And always support each other and take care of each other. >> And it should show that you always support and take care of each other.   Eventhough I didn\'t experience the true love in my life yet, but I think we don\'t have to get hurry to make love or meet someone new. >> Even though I haven\'t experienced true love in my life yet, I think that we don\'t have to hurry to make love or meet someone new.   Love will come someday. >> Correct! :)   Even if love isn\'t come, we received a lot of love from our family, so I think that is fully enough. >> Even though love hasn\'t come yet, we can receive a lot of love from our family and I think that is more than enough.This is the link of the \"She was pretty\". >> This is the link of the drama \"She was Pretty\".   some homepages indicated it \"She was beautiful\". >> Some homepages indicated it as \"She was beautiful\".   I found the site which support the End sub!! >> I found a site which supports English subtitles.   Google is the best site. >> Correct!   When you find some videoes, I recommend you to use Google. HAHAHA. Enjoy!! >_< >> When you are looking for videos, I recommend you to use Google. HAHAHA. Enjoy!! >_<

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