homework and essay

Hi [이름],

Thanks for your concern. I feel a lot better now. I hope you\'re okay, too.

Accident can happen anytime and anywhere, so you should be extra careful when driving.

I revised your answers. Please review them and don\'t hesitate to ask me if you have any questions.

See you later ^-^

-Amanda \")

i went to incheon for busness meeting with buyer.

>> I went to Incheon for a business meeting with a buyer.

 it was very important meeting for my team.

>> It wad a very important meeting for my team.

 unfortunatly, when i drived that car acciendt.

>> Unfortunately, I had a car accident.

Today, i go to hospital near by company.  so that i can attention myself every time.

>> I went to a hospital near my company today and had a medical check up. 

fortunately Doctor said me that take rest and be carefully.

>> Fortunately, the doctor advised me to just take a rest and drive carefully.

 when i work off today. i take rest my home.

>> I will take a rest at home.


 HOMEWORK
What would you like to have or achieve before the end of 2018? Why?

i want to achieve transfering more big company.

>> I want to move to a bigger company before the end of this year. 

>> OR:  My goal this year is to work in a bigger company.

 i effort that study english and my job for succesfully transfer company. 

>> I\'m exerting a lot of effort in studying English because I know that being proficient in English would help me land a job in a big company. 

 because im 35 international age.
it was young for industry.  so, i must vision for me and i feel like succesfully mind.

>> I am 35 years old in international age  which is quiet young in the industry I work in, so I must have a clear vision of want I want to be in the near future.

i have a big dream that is work on top 1 cosmetics company.

>> My dream is to work for the number 1 cosmetic company in Korea.

>>OR: My dream is to work for a leading cosmetic company.