homework and essay

Hi [이름],

I did several revisions on your composition below, please review them and should you have any questions, please ask me during class.

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Amanda ^-^

 i was very intersting weekend.

>> It was a very intersting weekend. 

 i slept long time and played game at home.  and eated delicious bred and rest in my room.

>> I had long hours of sleep, played a game at home and ate delicious bread.

somtimes, we need a rest in home. it was very calm and feel like peacefull.

>> Sometimes, we need to take a rest at home. It\'s very calm and peaceful. 

 and than, i went to lotte shopping center on sunday.

>> I also went to Lotte shopping center on Sunday.

 i shopped somting cloth and i buyed my wife cloth but disappointed lunch in shopping mall.  because i orderd pork cutlet that was insufficient ingredient. few pork lower than 1 years ago.
>> I shopped something for my wife and myself. I had lunch at the shopping mall, but I was disappointed because the pork cutlet I ordered lacked ingredients. Their serving is also smaller compared to last year.

 anyway i went back in home and rest my wife.

>> Anyway, I went back home and had some rest with my wife.

 it was charging energe for me to work tomorrow monday.

>> I had to recharge my energy to prepare for work the next day.


 HOMEWORK

What does your culture think about single parenting? Please expand your answer.


i think single parenting that inefficient care to baby. 

>> I think single parenting is inefficient.

 in case of multi working(mom and dad) it is unfair system. they are tired and stressed from working who need a rest time. 

>> The system doesn\'t seem to be fair for single parents who has multiple jobs. They will be so tired and stressed from working and they need time to rest.

 if mom or dad take single parenting after work, it was unhelthy to body and mental. 

>> If the single mom or dad do parenting jobs after work, it would be both physically ad mentally unhealthy.

 for baby and us, we care half and half time for baby.

>> They wont be able to provide sufficient care for the baby.