HOMEWORK AND ESSAY

Please review the revision I made below. See you later:) -Amanda

 I phone call my mother after long time.

>> I called my mother after a long time. 

 I had been live with mother before l married.

>> I used to live with my mother before I got married.

 Currently, my mother live in seoul. 

>> Currently, my mother lives in Seoul. 

>> OR: My mother is currently living in Seoul.

 i want phone call mother everyday but it is to hard because busy working.
>> I want to call my mother ever day but it is hard because I\'m busy with my job. 

 my mother said me that made dogs house something. 

>> My mother told me that she built a dog house.

 i heard that worried something because hers arm is weekness. 

>> I got worried when I heard about it because her arms are weak.

 so, i said \"take care\" and \"be carefully everytime\"  anyway i love mom.

>> I told her to take care of herself all the time. I really love my mom.

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 What is one thing that happened this year that you want to change if you could? Why?



my father retired this year.

>> My father retired this year.

*** Always capitalize the first letter of your sentence.

 he had operated supermarket for the past 15years in seoul.

>> He managed a supermarket in Seoul for the past 15 years.

 whenever he effort that increasing sales revenue and feeding our family. so,thanks for his dedication. 

>> He worked really hard to increase the supermarket\'s sales revenue to support our family, so I\'m really thankful for his dedication. 

 
i think that father is mean \"superman\" for our family. 

>> I think my father is the \"superman\" in our family. 

 we made celebration card and gift for father who was very appreciate for us. 

>> We made celebration cards for him and gave him gifts to show how much we appreciate him.

 whenever appreciation and dedicate my father and i repay one\'s kindness.

>> My father\'s dedication deserves appreciation, so we try to repay him with love and kindness.