Homework and excuse to delay the class for a week
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It has been said, "Not everything that is learned is contained in books." Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?
=> I believe the knowlege in books almost contains the wisdom and the knowlege in life. But sometimes it is written for only itself or have a limit. When it does, it's far from reality. For instance, some laws don't contain morality. Any law doesn't tell us to help people. It's only not to commit a crime.
I think experience in life is the best teacher of us. Through experience, people can gain knowlege, realize wisdom and get insights of life. but, if you want to get a deeply and extensively knowlege, because the knowlege goes with flow in time, it's one of the best way to read books.
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Dear, teacher.
Hello. I forgot to tell you that I would delay because of traveling for Singapore for a week. I will leave Korea on Monday and comeback on Saturday. ^.^ See you in two weeks~~
강사 첨삭
Hello there! Thank you for sending a well-thought of answer to the question I gave..You put so much insight in your answer..
I am glad that you are travelling..I am sure that it will be great for you..Enjoy travelling and I\'ll see you in two weeks..^^
T. Aimee
It has been said, \"Not everything that is learned is contained in books.\" Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?=> I believe the knowlege in books almost contains the wisdom and the knowlege in life.
>>I believe knowlege from books contains almost all the wisdom and the knowlege in life.
But sometimes it is written for only itself or have a limit.
>>But sometimes it is written only for itself or it has its limits.
When it does, it\'s far from reality. For instance, some laws don\'t contain morality.
>> Correct!
Any law doesn\'t tell us to help people. It\'s only not to commit a crime.
>> No law tells us to help people.It\'s only not to commit a crime.I think experience in life is the best teacher of us.
>>I think experience in life is our best teacher.
Through experience, people can gain knowlege, realize wisdom and get insights of life.
>> Correct!
but, if you want to get a deeply and extensively knowlege, because the knowlege goes with flow in time, it\'s one of the best way to read books.
>> But, if you want to get deep and extensive knowlege,one of the best ways is to read books because knowlege goes/comes with the flow of time.
-------Dear, teacher.
>>Dear Teacher,
Hello. I forgot to tell you that I would delay because of traveling for Singapore for a week.
>>Hello. I forgot to tell you that I would postpone class because I\'ll be travelling in Singapore for a week.
I will leave Korea on Monday and comeback on Saturday. ^.^ See you in two weeks~~
>>Correct!
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