Homework and freenote
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Jongu,
Thank you for taking the time to do your homework. I know you're really busy.
But I was expecting to read a long composition. ^ ^
Anyway, I know you can write something longer next time.
F. activity
Q: What's important to you regarding your personal life?
>>Correct
A: It is important to me to live a life without regret.
>> A: It is important for me to live a life without regret.
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I help him to open bakery with my wife from last friday to this Monday.
>>I helped him to open a bakery with my wife from Friday to yesterday.
To some, It is very important to promote.
>>To some, it is very important to be promoted.
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