homework and my essay

I don't know exactly about homework, but i think people in a courtroom have to be quiet. this is my essay. Although i carefully decide to do, i proceed as planned after deciding thing to do.I usually calculate time to take to me complete things like work and project and divide up into modules. So i proceed with the work on schedule. I can achieve my goal related to project when i do that. When i make RC car with control system, i decided to make it within 1 month. I planned to take project divided with functional modularity and develop it by the week. But the components i ordered were unexpectedly postponed. I was confused but i tried to finish the project in time even if i was up all night developing RC car. As a result, I could make it in time.

Hi [이름], Good evening! :) Im sure your tired. How is your project? I hope you finish it on time. I checked your sentences and here are some  of your corrections. Practice makes perfect! Have a good night --T. Ritchel I don\'t know exactly about homework, but i think people in a courtroom have to be quiet.>>I don\'t know exactly about this homework, but I think people in a courtroom should be quiet.this is my essay. >>This is my essay. Although i carefully decide to do, i proceed as planned after deciding thing to do. >>Although I carefully decided on what to do, I continued with the plan after deciding. I usually calculate time to take to me complete things like work and project and divide up into modules. >>I usually calculate the time it will take me to complete my work and project then I divide them into modules. So i proceed with the work on schedule. >>So i proceeded with the work schedule. I can achieve my goal related to project when i do that. >>When I do that, I can achieve the goal that is related to the project. When i make RC car with control system, i decided to make it within 1 month. >> I decided to make the RC car with the control system  within a month. I planned to take project divided with functional modularity and develop it by the week. >>I plan to divide the project with functional modularity and develop it within the week. But the components i ordered were unexpectedly postponed. >>Correct ( Becarefull with the word \"I\" it should be in capital) I was confused but i tried to finish the project in time even if i was up all night developing RC car. >>I was confused but I tried to finish the project in time even if I was up all night developing the RC car. As a result, I could make it in time. >>As a result, I can make it on time.