homework and presentation sentence

2015-04-02 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Q. Who is the most controversial politician in your country? Why? A. I'm don't know politics. but, I remember political pledge of president. because, It is wish about future. So, I just think that many people always talk about president. It's same reason. [Presentation script : introduction part] Good afternoon, Ladies and gentlemen. My name is [Name] Woo-Jae. I am attending a Masters Degree in the first quarter. and I am studying in Park Professor Plasma Laboratory. So, Today presentation topic is the bio-gas reforming process. Then, I will start it. [To. Jessy] The above statement is the script that you use frequently. When I think, the words of this sentence is very easy word. But I have a better script than what words you want. Thank you, my teacher.

강사 첨삭

Good morning! Thanks for doing your homework. I corrected your sentences. I am just not quite sure if I got all your ideas correctly. I mean, do you like to learn deeper words that you can use? Anyway, I also gave suggestions. You can make use of them next time. ^__^ See you later Jason! I hope I was able to help you. ~T. Jessie~ Q. Who is the most controversial politician in your country? Why?A. I\'m don\'t know politics. but, I remember political pledge of president.>> I don\'t know much about politics but I remember the plede of the president.because, It is wish about future. >> Because it is her wishes about the future.So, I just think that many people always talk about president. >> So, I just think that many people are always talking about the president. It\'s same reason.>> It\'s the same reason.[Presentation script : introduction part]>> Correct!Good afternoon, Ladies and gentlemen.>> Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen. OR>> Good afternoon my fellow students, professors ad guests. I am glad that you are here today even if you are very busy. My name is [Name] Woo-Jae. >> Correct! OR>> I am [Name] Woo-Jae. OR>> Standing in front of you is Jung Woo-jae. I am attending a Masters Degree in the first quarter.>> I am attending a Masters Degree in the first quarter and I am studying in  Professor Park Plasma Laboratory. OR>> I am taking up a Masters Degree in (subject/major). and I am studying in Park Professor Plasma Laboratory.>> I am attending a Masters Degree in the first quarter and I am studying in  Professor Park Plasma Laboratory.So, Today presentation topic is the bio-gas reforming process.>> So, today my presentation\'s topic is the bio-gas reforming process. OR>> I am going to talk to you about the bio-gas reforming process. OR>> I\'ve been asked to talk about the bio-gas reforming process. Then, I will start it.>> Correct! OR>> Let\'s begin.[To. Jessy]The above statement is the script that you use frequently. >> Correct!When I think, the words of this sentence is very easy word. >> When I think of it, the words of these sentences are very easy. But I have a better script than what words you want. >> But I have a better script than the words you want. Thank you, my teacher. >> Correct!

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