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2017-05-17 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Prescribe / prohibit balm / irritant Profane / holy Subtle / obvious Sophomoric / profound - This is the mail I sent to the lodging company in the past. Ask for grammar check please. 1. Dear, Mrs. [Name].Thank you for reply. I want reservation. I am so happy that I have a reservation. reservation Data [계좌번호], 1 night, 2 Person Is it OK? and I want Non smoking room.and I want know CheckIn time and CheckOut time. Regards Hi[이름]. 2. Dear, Mrs. [Name]. Thank you for reply.I have confirmed this mail now.I want know room charge.And I want lake view please! Look at the promised date! Regards Hi[이름]. 3. Dear, Mrs. [Name]. I did not receive a reply from the mail.for your action please.thanks Regards, Hi[이름]. 4. Dear, Mrs. [Name]. I arrive at the train at 09:25AM. It is going to go right to the 'Haus Lidy'.So, check-in time is likely to be from 10:00 AM to 10:30 AM. Is early check-in possible? If not, will you provide luggage storage services? I will wait for your reply.

강사 첨삭

Yes, Jay!!!

You can speak the English well, you can make a good conservation, if you just push yourself to speak and improve your skills,

Just believe in yourself that you can.

Have a great day!!!

T. Jeny


Prescribe / prohibit

>>correct
 balm / irritant

>> correct
 Profane / holy

>>correct
 Subtle / obvious

>>correct
 Sophomoric / profound
>>correct

This is the mail I sent to the lodging company in the past.

>>This is a mail I sent to a lodging company in the past.
 Ask for grammar check please.

>>correct
 1. Dear, Mrs. [Name].Thank you for reply.

>> 1. Dear, Mrs. [Name]. Thank you for your reply.

I want reservation.

>>I want to make a reservation.
 I am so happy that I have a reservation.

>>I am so happy that I\'ve made a reservation.

reservation Data [계좌번호], 1 night, 2 Person Is it OK?

>>I want to make a reservation on [계좌번호] for 1 night good for 2 persons. Is it available?
 and I want Non smoking room.and I want know CheckIn time and CheckOut time.

>>I would like to have a non-smoking room.

and want know CheckIn time and CheckOut time.

>>Thus I also want to know the check-in and check-out time.
 Regards Hi[이름].

>>correct
 2. Dear, Mrs. [Name]. 

>>correct
 Thank you for reply.

>>Thank you for your reply.

I have confirmed this mail now.I want know room charge.

>>I\'ve confirmed this mail now and I want know room\'s charge.

And I want lake view please! Look at the promised date! 

>>I would like to be at the lake view, please. Please, refer on the date of my reservation.
 Regards Hi[이름].

>>correct
 3. Dear, Mrs. [Name]. 

>>correct
 I did not receive a reply from the mail.for your action please.thanks

>> I did not receive a reply and I am looking forward for your immediate response. Thanks!!!
 Regards, Hi[이름].

>>correct
 4. Dear, Mrs. [Name].

>>correct
 I arrive at the train at 09:25AM.

>>correct

 It is going to go right to the \'Haus Lidy\'.

>> It is going to go right to \'Haus Lidy\'.

So, check-in time is likely to be from 10:00 AM to 10:30 AM.

>>So, my check-in time would likely to be from 10:00 AM to 10:30 AM.
Is early check-in possible?

>>Is it possible to check-in early?

If not, will you provide luggage storage services?

>>If not, will you provide a luggage storage service?

 I will wait for your reply.

>>correct

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