Homework and Question
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Yes, Jay!!!
You can speak the English well, you can make a good conservation, if you just push yourself to speak and improve your skills,
Just believe in yourself that you can.
Have a great day!!!
T. Jeny
Prescribe / prohibit
>>correct
balm / irritant
>> correct
Profane / holy
>>correct
Subtle / obvious
>>correct
Sophomoric / profound
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This is the mail I sent to the lodging company in the past.
>>This is a mail I sent to a lodging company in the past.
Ask for grammar check please.
>>correct
1. Dear, Mrs. [Name].Thank you for reply.
>> 1. Dear, Mrs. [Name]. Thank you for your reply.
I want reservation.
>>I want to make a reservation.
I am so happy that I have a reservation.
>>I am so happy that I\'ve made a reservation.
reservation Data [계좌번호], 1 night, 2 Person Is it OK?
>>I want to make a reservation on [계좌번호] for 1 night good for 2 persons. Is it available?
and I want Non smoking room.and I want know CheckIn time and CheckOut time.
>>I would like to have a non-smoking room.
and want know CheckIn time and CheckOut time.
>>Thus I also want to know the check-in and check-out time.
Regards Hi[이름].
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2. Dear, Mrs. [Name].
>>correct
Thank you for reply.
>>Thank you for your reply.
I have confirmed this mail now.I want know room charge.
>>I\'ve confirmed this mail now and I want know room\'s charge.
And I want lake view please! Look at the promised date!
>>I would like to be at the lake view, please. Please, refer on the date of my reservation.
Regards Hi[이름].
>>correct
3. Dear, Mrs. [Name].
>>correct
I did not receive a reply from the mail.for your action please.thanks
>> I did not receive a reply and I am looking forward for your immediate response. Thanks!!!
Regards, Hi[이름].
>>correct
4. Dear, Mrs. [Name].
>>correct
I arrive at the train at 09:25AM.
>>correct
It is going to go right to the \'Haus Lidy\'.
>> It is going to go right to \'Haus Lidy\'.
So, check-in time is likely to be from 10:00 AM to 10:30 AM.
>>So, my check-in time would likely to be from 10:00 AM to 10:30 AM.
Is early check-in possible?
>>Is it possible to check-in early?
If not, will you provide luggage storage services?
>>If not, will you provide a luggage storage service?
I will wait for your reply.
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