homework and script
학생이 쓴 원문
HOME WORK -
I love to meet new people. because meeting new people encourage me to be a more good person.
you know, meeting new people, i can learn another world.
i mean whenever i meet another major social group, my values are change like i wake up 5 am, start to learn computer language.
overall, i love to meet new people.
OPIC script -
actually I don\'t have time to cook. because I am a job seeker. you know, as a job seeker, I need time to study for the license. but once a month, I meet cousin. she is high school student. she really like me. so I like to meet her. every time, I deal a dinner to her, most of time we eat out, but sometimes I make 참치쌈장(chamchi ssamjang) for her. because she like to eat 참치쌈장 with pork. and 쌈(Ssam) is one of her favorite food. but you know, I like to cook but,, haha,,, you know,,, like is not mean good, a lot of time I spoil the cooking. haha, but you know, she still like me and she still respect me. haha
강사 첨삭
Hi Layla!^^
Thank you for sending your homework.
Cheers!
Jean
HOME WORK -
I love to meet new people. because meeting new people encourage me to be a more good person.
>> I love to meet new people because meeting them encourages me to be a better person.
you know, meeting new people, i can learn another world.
>> You know, I can learn things about another world when I meet new people.
i mean whenever i meet another major social group, my values are change like i wake up 5 am, start to learn computer language.
>> I mean, whenever I meet another major social group, my values change like I wake up at 5 am and start to learn the computer language.
Overall, I love to meet new people.
>> correct
OPIC script -
actually I don\'t have time to cook. because I am a job seeker.
>> Actually, I don\'t have time to cook because I am a job seeker.
you know, as a job seeker, I need time to study for the license.
>> You know, as a job seeker, I need time to study for my license.
but once a month, I meet cousin. she is high school student.
>> But once a month, I meet my cousin who is a high school student.
she really like me. so I like to meet her.
>> She really likes me so I enjoy hanging out with her.
every time, I deal a dinner to her, most of time we eat out, but sometimes I make 참치쌈장(chamchi ssamjang) for her. because she like to eat 참치쌈장 with pork.
>> Every time I agree to have dinner with her, we mostly eat out, but I sometimes make 참치쌈장 (chamchi ssamjang) for her because she likes to eat 참치쌈장 with pork.
and 쌈(Ssam) is one of her favorite food. but you know, I like to cook but,, haha,,, you know,,, like is not mean good, a lot of time I spoil the cooking. haha, but you know, she still like me and she still respect me. haha
>> Also, ssam or pork wrapped with leafy vegetables is one of her favorite food. I have to say that although I like cooking, it doesn\'t mean that I\'m good at it and I\'m proud to say she still likes and respects me regardless of my lack of cooking skills.
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