Homework and self-introduction

Hi there! A great Wednesday evening to you. Thank you so much for answering your homework. You are good in constructing sentences. I enjoyed reading your self introduction in this composition. You are really good in terms of expressing your ideas. Keep up the good work!

T. Lara ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

Homework
1. I have to make a telephone call.

>> Correct
2. She didn\'t do her best so she felt sad.

>> Correct
3. It was the first time she didn\'t make the beds.

>> Correct
4. She was late so she didn\'t make breakfast for them.

>> Correct
5. He did the assignment, but forgot to bring it to school.

>> Correct

Self-introduction
>>This is my self-introduction.

>>OR This composition is all about me.

Hello,this is [이름].

>> Correct
First of all, I\'m very pleased to recieve your phonecall.

>> Correct
Although I\'m living in Korea I\'m a chinese who have been here for almost 4 years.

>> Although I\'m living in Korea, I\'m a Chinese who have been here for almost four years.
I got my bachelor degree in China and my major was finance.

>> I got my bachelor\'s degree in China and my major was finance.

After that, I came to Korea to get my master degree at Yonsei University.

>> After that, I came to Korea to get my master\'s degree at Yonsei University.
I\'m applying for a position at Marketing Department of your company.

>> I\'m applying for a position at the Marketing Department of our company.
My career began with a Global Management Trainee Program in LG Electronics Korean HQ.

>> My career began with the Global Management Trainee Program of LG Electronics Korean HQ.
From the half year trainee experience and 1year work experience as a product manager I acquired proficiency in market data analysis and channel management which may benefit you.