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homework : A B C A A
i attended a meeting that explained visit student program generally. the adviser told us how to apply for abroad university, how much expense is expected, who will go with me and so on.i really wanna go abroad especailly america, but after listend very high expenses, i have been worrying about value that is worth paying indeed. the reason why i try to go to america is first, improving english skill. second, meeting diverse friends and feeling bigger world. my shool name is hankuk university of foreign studies and school has a lot of foreigners. so i have had a lot of chances of making friends ,but i didn't do that. so i thought i missed the good chances and now i supposed to choose difficult, expensive way. and i'm sorry to my parents because parents cover all the expenses.But on a second thought, it's already decided to go abroad and i'll do the best is all i can do. and as the Korean saying is A thousand hearings are not worth one seeing, i'll experience more
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Hello my dear,
I do agree with that. There are some instances that we regret a part of our life not doing something or anything about the thing that we want.
But now that you have this opportunity, all you have to do is for you to do your best and give it your best shot.
This is a one of a kind experinece my dear, and to be honest with you, I really envy you because I wasn\'t given that kind of chance to go abroad..
ANyway, I will be talking to you again on Monday baby and have a great weekend with your mom and dad..
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
homework : A B C A A>>correcti attended a meeting that explained visit student program generally.
>>correct...Just observe proper Capitalization.
the adviser told us how to apply for abroad university, how much expense is expected, who will go with me and so on.
>>correct..Just observe proper Capitalization.
i really wanna go abroad especailly america, but after listend very high expenses, i have been worrying about value that is worth paying indeed.
>>I really wanna go abroad most especially America, but after listening to the lecture, I\'ve been worried about the value that is worht paying indeed.
the reason why i try to go to america is first, improving english skill. >>correct..Just observe proper Capitalization.
second, meeting diverse friends and feeling bigger world.
>>correct..Just observe proper Capitalization.
my shool name is hankuk university of foreign studies and school has a lot of foreigners.
>>correct..Just observe proper Capitalization.
so i have had a lot of chances of making friends ,but i didn\'t do that.
>>correct..Just observe proper Capitalization.
so i thought i missed the good chances and now i supposed to choose difficult, expensive way.
>>correct..Just observe proper Capitalization.
and i\'m sorry to my parents because parents cover all the expenses.
>>correct..Just observe proper Capitalization.
>>I feel really sorry for my parents because they have to cover all the expenses.
But on a second thought, it\'s already decided to go abroad and i\'ll do the best is all i can do.
>>correct..Just observe proper Capitalization.
>>But on a second thought, I\'ve already decided to go abroad and I will do the best that I can.
and as the Korean saying is A thousand hearings are not worth one seeing, i\'ll experience more
>>correct..Just observe proper Capitalization.
>>As the Korean saying goes, A thousand hearings are not worth one seeing, and with this I know I will experience more.
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