Homework and today's topic

2012-08-29 · 첨삭 강사 Nica

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[Homework] 1. An expresso is a type of coffee 2. A lawnmower is a machine to cut your grass 3. A warehouse is a place where goods are stored 4. A plum is a type of fruit 5. A train timetable is a list of times when trains have to leave [Topic] I live in songdo-dong of In-cheon city, It is newly delveloped place like Dubai, At past here was sea, but 6 years ago, reclaim land from the sea. At this place, many company construct plants, laboratories, tall buildings, and Some university establish their campus. Day by day the cityspace is changed My company is located here, so I moved 3 yaars ago. I live in an apartment, it isn't new but almost clean and good, Especially it is near to my workplace, it take 10 minutes by car, 20 minutes on foot so, I save time. I Live on the 10th floor which has 3 bedrooms, a dining room, a kitchen and 2 bathroom. the view is very nice, because we can see the sea in dining room

강사 첨삭

Hey there! I really appreciate you for doing your homework and I can say that you did a tremendous job! And I admire the way you deal with learning English, you are initiating some ways for you to develop your skills which is a positive attitude. Let us work together I believe that you can do it! See you.^__^ T. Nica ^^ Here are my corrections for you: 1. An expresso is a type of coffee >> Correct!2. A lawnmower is a machine to cut your grass >> Correct!3. A warehouse is a place where goods are stored >> Correct!4. A plum is a type of fruit >> Correct!5. A train timetable is a list of times when trains have to leave >> Correct![Topic]I live in songdo-dong of In-cheon city, It is newly delveloped place like Dubai, >> I live in Songdo-dong in In-cheon city. It is a newly developed place like Dubai.At past here was sea, but 6 years ago, reclaim land from the sea. >> Before there was a sea here but 6 years ago it was reclaimed a land.At this place, many company construct plants, laboratories, tall buildings, and Some university establish their campus. >> In this place many companies construct plants, laboratories, tall buildings and some Universities established their campuses.Day by day the cityspace is changed. >> Corrrect!My company is located here, so I moved 3 yaars ago. >> My company is located here so I moved here 3 years ago.  I live in an apartment. >> Correct! it isn\'t new but almost clean and good, Especially it is near to my workplace, it take 10 minutes by car, 20 minutes on foot so, I save time. >> It i sn\'t new but it\'s clean and good, especially that it is near my workplace and it only takes 10 minutes by car or 20 minutes by walking so I save time. I Live on the 10th floor which has 3 bedrooms, a dining room, a kitchen and 2 bathroom. >> I live in the 10th floor which has 3 bedrooms, a dining room, a kitchen and 2 bathrooms. the view is very nice, because we can see the sea in dining room >> The view is very nice because we can see the sea in the dining room.

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